Saturday, May 03, 2008

Not having a good afternoon...

Have been working for over an hour. Here's what I've got so far...

He stepped towards her, put his drink down next to her empty plate and straightened, so close that they nearly touched. Then without hesitating bent swiftly and brushed her lips in a kiss that was more of a question.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh. WHY WONT THIS FUCKING SCENE WORK. WHY. WHY. WHY.

Usually at this point I'd have a drink, but yesterday I had a champagne or two and ended up downloading Broken Wings by Mr. Mister onto my iPod.

Frankly there are depths to which I'd rather not sink.

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Sandie Hudson said...

Cait, if this scene isn't working go on to another one. Give it some time, just step back. Shit make him bloody wait. If he's not playing nice make him do something boring like wash his. With her in a wet t-shirt.

Always works for me, I do the you can look but can't touch. Hehehe.

But really move on to another scene and come back when you not feeling so frustrated with it all.

Now I'm going to read your other post.